Peridot- Draw This Again Meme

 Remember this drawing? Well here it is again, except somewhat less cringey. : D Anyway I got super lazy with the background because I just wasn't going to put up with that torture a second time. So yeash... Quite a few flaws with perspective and everything but whatever. Also I'm going to post a comparison version of this so that you can see the improvement better I guess. Lol. Also if you have any advice or criticism for me I would gladly appreciate it because I like me my criticism. 

Commission Info Here:
narkissa03.deviantart.com/art/…